Today we peer reviewed our drafts for our cases, so there isn't really much to say. There weren't many people in class, including Professor Condon, so we didn't stay very long.
I worked with Jackson, Haley, and Anna; however, Jackson was the only one to review my paper. He gave me some great feedback that will definitely help me restructure my paper to make it more interesting. Currently, it is pretty dry because it is a lot of legal jargon, which unfortunately is hard to work around because I am focusing on the law and how it relates to my case. But the advice Jackson gave me to work in my case information more with the facts, intertwining them in a way should definitely make my paper more digestible! I read Anna's, and although she wasn't completely finished, she was off to a good start! Really other than this we didn't do much...So I guess the only other thing I have to say is that I will be going home to work on my paper tonight so I can have it ready for Thursday's TED talks!
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